jueves, 25 de junio de 2015

Photo description corrected (Cape town)

Hello my friends, I'll be describe the picture that was in cape fats, it is situated to " the southeast of the central business district of cape town".

The picture, looks bad, in the middle there are some peoples, and kids, that are seated in the street, and they are looking at the background where is an old building, that is being renovated by some construction workers. In the bottom left corner is a black cild that is running away of the street, and just cooking the camera when the picture had been taken.

The people in cape flats are different people, different from the rest, having different culture and they talk with an unusual language of english, in the caption says, " nowadays colored people in cape flats feel discriminated by white people.In the past, this situation has a lot different".

If I go to this place, I would be very careful with my words to these people, because if someone says something to them, they can become annoying and they can feel very bad.

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jueves, 14 de mayo de 2015

Practice of Picture describe

Hello everybody  my name is Matias Hornauer and today we will describe the Picture with the caption "this festival represent the best of our tradition" .

to start with description of the picture I can see that in the middle of the picture there are a lot of hand of women that are touching themselves on staying with  a lot of colors. To the right Was the face of a girl and his friends put the  hand with the blue colors and spread it on the cheeks. In the background I can see a poster that was pasted on a wall. At the bottom left corner was the neck and a piece of cloth that has some little drops or stains of colors.

the culture of this place is the holi festival , in india it is a traditions celebrated every year and many people go and travel to that place and participate of this good event.

also India has a different culture that has others countries, the cultural diversity in India represents the arrival of sharing of his Festival

in conclusion my opinion of the experiences that I have are that these types of events are to share with the family and friends and also to lern and have fun with people outside, last year in the summer, I went to pucon in the south of chile and I had the opportunity to participate in an activity event of sura, that was "the colour run", that was to run in the city like 5 km, with five stand in every km, well the stand was of guns with a colour inside and then a party that motivated me so much, I felt so good.

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viernes, 5 de diciembre de 2014

diary entry about plagiarism

dear diary,

This morning, when I wake up I was looking on internet some news of the actuality and in the cover of the news say that a person in the university don't pass the thesis because he do plagiarism, he copy the 90% of the thesis on internet, because of that he came out of the university and now he have to enter on another university but with the knowledge of the other university that he plagiarism something. When I see that new I start searching about what was paliarism and I looked a page of internet that say "The presentation of the work of another person as one's own or without proper acknowledgement"
(http://www.concordia.ca/students/academic-integrity/plagiarism.html)

In simple words it say that plagiarism is to copy another work that is know in your authority and you don't quote this. because of this I now have knowledge that plagiarism can make you lose your career and make you lose some years of your life, and because of that plagiarism can make you for other people an unreliable person.

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domingo, 30 de noviembre de 2014

Dialogue

"Substance abuse"

Matias:      Hi Stefano, how are you

Stefano:

Matias:   Find , hey friend yesterday  was looking the news with my family and just came out a very important topic, that show the topic of alcohol. do you know about something of alcohol ? for example (binge drinking or teenager drink).

Stefano:

Matias: Yes,yes I know that information but for me what surprise me the most was the teenager drinking, because I see some pictures impact.

Stefano:

Matias:  I don't know, but I know a person that was alcoholic, binge drinking, my fathers are friend of her´s father's  and last  Friday I see that people and he has a several's problems.

Stefano:

lunes, 10 de noviembre de 2014

Task7

Diary entry:  

17 november, 2013

Dear diary,

I saw in the news that an olympic sport man was abusing of steroid , the problem is, that man was using those drugs in a high level competition. the research done by the FBI found that this man was using steroids very frequently, causing a huge differences between the competitors.
He was disqualified of the competition and he was sent to a judge to decide his punishment.

What I think about this guy, despite he was cheating, he is destroying his body, the steroids might be very powerful in a short time spawn, but the effects done lately by this drug might cause serious injures and the disable cause by the use of this, are almost incurable.

By first, the problem begins with a malfunction of the endocrine system (hormones), causing the body malfunction to produce hormones,
The second part, the usage of this drug cause the muscular system to grow causing to the user to loose control of his body because the muscle grows so big that its impossible to move.

What I can say by now, is that person apparently being judge at this moment, now he needs to take care of himself because all this problems will disable him.
And all of this things happen because of not "playing" fair.