viernes, 5 de diciembre de 2014

diary entry about plagiarism

dear diary,

This morning, when I wake up I was looking on internet some news of the actuality and in the cover of the news say that a person in the university don't pass the thesis because he do plagiarism, he copy the 90% of the thesis on internet, because of that he came out of the university and now he have to enter on another university but with the knowledge of the other university that he plagiarism something. When I see that new I start searching about what was paliarism and I looked a page of internet that say "The presentation of the work of another person as one's own or without proper acknowledgement"
(http://www.concordia.ca/students/academic-integrity/plagiarism.html)

In simple words it say that plagiarism is to copy another work that is know in your authority and you don't quote this. because of this I now have knowledge that plagiarism can make you lose your career and make you lose some years of your life, and because of that plagiarism can make you for other people an unreliable person.

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domingo, 30 de noviembre de 2014

Dialogue

"Substance abuse"

Matias:      Hi Stefano, how are you

Stefano:

Matias:   Find , hey friend yesterday  was looking the news with my family and just came out a very important topic, that show the topic of alcohol. do you know about something of alcohol ? for example (binge drinking or teenager drink).

Stefano:

Matias: Yes,yes I know that information but for me what surprise me the most was the teenager drinking, because I see some pictures impact.

Stefano:

Matias:  I don't know, but I know a person that was alcoholic, binge drinking, my fathers are friend of her´s father's  and last  Friday I see that people and he has a several's problems.

Stefano:

lunes, 10 de noviembre de 2014

Task7

Diary entry:  

17 november, 2013

Dear diary,

I saw in the news that an olympic sport man was abusing of steroid , the problem is, that man was using those drugs in a high level competition. the research done by the FBI found that this man was using steroids very frequently, causing a huge differences between the competitors.
He was disqualified of the competition and he was sent to a judge to decide his punishment.

What I think about this guy, despite he was cheating, he is destroying his body, the steroids might be very powerful in a short time spawn, but the effects done lately by this drug might cause serious injures and the disable cause by the use of this, are almost incurable.

By first, the problem begins with a malfunction of the endocrine system (hormones), causing the body malfunction to produce hormones,
The second part, the usage of this drug cause the muscular system to grow causing to the user to loose control of his body because the muscle grows so big that its impossible to move.

What I can say by now, is that person apparently being judge at this moment, now he needs to take care of himself because all this problems will disable him.
And all of this things happen because of not "playing" fair.


lunes, 3 de noviembre de 2014

Task 6


Writing task

Alcoholism in teenangers


Alcohol destroy your present and will still doing in the future.
What is alcoholism?
"Alcoholism is a chronic and often progressive disease that includes problems controlling your drinking". According to mayo clinic staff

The problem is that children 14 to 15 years, start drinking and in excess, they dosen't have problems with your parents because they do it in secrets, and their parents trust them without knowing what they are doing, besides they can not buy alcohol, for being underage, ask other peoples that is near.

Firstly I want to make them understand that alcohol is most of all to have fun and to drink in moderation, because at any age if you drink alcohol in excess, you will have consequences.Furthermore the children as I said earlier (childrens of 14 to15 years) , or people
Under 21 years old.

One of the most striking thing was the physical health of the binge drinking topic, as started by dowshen  "studies show that people who binge-drink throughout high school are more likely to be overweight and have high blood pressure by the time they are 24. Just one regular beer contains about  150 calories, which adds up to a lot of calories if someone drinks four or five beers a night"

To conclude I tell the new consequences, for example "if you want to drive at night, you can not drink for any reason" and for the teenanger thus if drink in excess can go to the curator.

Bibliograpy:

"Drinking" : -downshen,s (2013), bringe drinking.reterieved from http://kidshealth.org/teen/drug_alcohol/alcohol/binge_drink.html

"Alcoholism": - mayo clinic staff
http://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/alcoholism/basics/definition/con-2002086


martes, 14 de octubre de 2014

Task 5

Word reflections "obesity"

I think that obesity aré incrisingly more and more in the human life, everitime more cases Of obesity arround the world, it is not an easy problema to Fix. Is a highly contestes topic, the cause Of this issue is because they dosen't  have a good alimentation, eat mac donalds, so much bread, and eat all the day at every hours.

The peoples that has this problem dosen't do sports, because they are not use to, these peoples are very lazy.

My cousin has a friend that has this problem Of obesity and my cousin talk me that he was use to because he has this problem six years ago, but also it is so difficult to fix and to have a life like that, but he said that this problem to he is still happy, all Her family help and supports, concluding, all peoples who are over weight have to be careful enough.

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lunes, 29 de septiembre de 2014

Task 3

Thinglink 


http://www.thinglink.com/scene/565962280458518528

Task 4


"Manorexia activity - answers.P.44"
What is manorexia ?

Manorexia is when people's that don't eat well like beef, fish, etc and they feed theirself by sports supplements like proteins.

Summarize the reasons why manorexia is on the rise.

Theres a lot of reasons why manorexia it's in rise, the first one it's the mass media advertising that gives people the wrong stereotype and make then think of a perfect and utopic body build, other reasons are self-esteem, past traumatic experience, or cultural influences or presior.

Why is it difficulty to identify manorexics?

Manomrexia it's difficult to diagnose because of the, not stereotypical simtops express by the person.

What does the text say about overweight children and  athletes in relation to eating disorders?

the last paragraph says that a profesional athlete as a obese person or fat boy, can have the same eatong disorder from the same or similar reasons.



jueves, 11 de septiembre de 2014

Task1

written assignment (correction)


-12 October 

sr you never give me the written assigment to do the correction.

domingo, 17 de agosto de 2014

Diary entry

Last year i traveled to New Zeland in a school tour. I had an experience unforgetable but like all the trips, i had some problems, mainly with culture traditions. One of this problems was that all the mornings after breackfast i had to pray with all the people of  the house were i was staying. Another problem that i had, it was the language, because when i try to have a conversation with the teacher in the school, it was so difficult for me to understand her, because she spoke very fast and also there are a lot of different words that confused me. 
On the other hand, they have another tradition in the sport enviroment, for example in rugby, before they play a match, thay do the haka, that is a traditional maori dance. that it is very difficul to dance.
Desipe these problems i think its a very nice country and it is very safety, for example the police do not take guns, that means you do not need as much security.

lunes, 9 de junio de 2014

global warming ! prezi

http://prezi.com/wbzbcspi1yih/present/?auth_key=tj8nzcn&follow=heikwnsjygnx&kw=present-wbzbcspi1yih&rc=ref-83756906

domingo, 27 de abril de 2014

Correction of the letter(Harrison Bergeron)

Mr. Kurt Vonnegut
380 via annutti, cazarsa ligure, Italy 
vonnedut.kv 60070
kvonnegut72@gmail.com
www.harrisnbergeron.com

Dear sir,

Well, nice to meet you, I am writing to you to ask some questions and I will talk about my opinion of the question that I'm going to ask, and I'll tell you if I will agree or disagree with the world full of handicaps and will explain my opinion that there "true equality in this world".

You Mr. Author created this world because he saw that some people had a gifted intelligence and he didn'tlike people to be diferent to the rest. hance created a world full of handicaps. For now, all the people are equals and the people are that most intelligent with this idea they can not be.

Now, I tell that I obviously disagree with this world because a person he studies and works and that isually he intelligence, for me the world that you created Mr. Kurt , It doesn´t  have a true equality, it was a wrong equality, but if you want to use this handicaps, I think that the world will belave.

Finally to recommend to you, you can change this type of equalization or end with this. These are two options because as I said, it will not workin the world

I hope that what I said worus for you , good bye see you

(my signature)
matias hornauer 

matihornauer@gmail.com                                                 238 words

martes, 22 de abril de 2014

Cnn letter

April 22 , 2014

Mr.
CNN news editor.
Atlanta,GA.
USA.

Dear sir,

I' m according with

lunes, 24 de marzo de 2014

AD preparation handout

1) Where will you publish your ad? Why did you choose that source?

I will publish on the internet and my source was www.apple.com and you can see the tutorial video to know how use this cellphone (the name of the cellphone is new special phone 1.0)

2) What is the message that you transmit?

All the persons can use this cellphone, disabled peoples can feel like de rest.


3) Who will be your target audience? ....

Was from disabled peoples for any age, this cellphone was so fast and you can talk with him, and for the peoples that are disabled has a %of discount and more preferences.


4) What stereotype will you use? Why will you use it? What does this stereotype represent?

The stereotype I use for disabled peoples and represent Don Francisco of the teleton, this type of stereotype represent that all peoples can use this cellphone ( boys, girlds, granfather, disabled peoples, etc). Use it because with this you can do what ever you want.

5)...

Would be Ethos because he sample and offers the product was a famus people, buinessman and a successful on the topic of disabled.
I choose because this peoples has to updated and have entertainment.
Was present like a good moment.

6)... 

Slogan: Was for all the type of person.
I put Don Francisco in the teleton with a disabled boy and Don Francisco give to him a phone that are the new special phone 1.0 ad layout.

"here was the last of tecnology"

"one of the most important thing in the present (actuality)

and  the mode of persuation  ethos

ad photo


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